FILM paru-paro
here the screen play that I made.
this is just the first chapter jut to give the general opening view.
This a suspence comedy, the first chapter is a bit of humor,just an introduction of all the charcters, ill post the other scene as soon as i finished it.
This is our final film production diveded by five chapters running time is 30-45 min.
Synopsis
A ordinary bum, named Nick, who lives in the street, got entwined with a pshycotic killers plan, and started to hunt not only him but the people important to his life, His apple of the eye Sarah, a university student, is the next target of the strange killer, nick must chase time and do everything to save sarah.
even though sarah si clueless on everything
Special Note
Sarah will escape the killer, but end up dead in the end.
She thought that the killer is nick thats why she's trying to get away with him and fell off the cliff
thats explain the introduction scene
also nick will comit suicide and jump off the cliff too, holding the butterfly hair clip that sarah likes to wear.
Chapter 1
His-story
Chapter two
The Stranger
Chapter three
The Date
Chapter four
Saving a Death trap
Chapter five
the beggining of an end.
DRAFT SCRIPT
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Working Title: paru-paro
‘’To be Able to tell my story, I need to tell their story’’
Opening Scene
A male, standing on a side of a cliff, crying and holding something in his left hand, looking up in the sky. His eyes full of despair and loneliness, bruise on his knees and a minor cut that bleeds in his thigh.
Cut Fade to Black Chargen Text: Few days ago
Flash Back
Chapter I.
His-Story
SCENE 1: LOCATION; along Harrison road, side walk near Melvin Jones Park.
Nick the main character is slowly walking, seems thinking about something deep, holding a bottle cup, playing with it, tossing it in the air, and holding it like a piece of prize.
Someone shouted from afar
KID: (extra) ‘KUYA NICK’
Nick will turn around to look at the kid, as there eyes met, Nick started to run, while showing the bottle cup, teasing the kid to chase him, the kid, tries to chase nick who’s fooling around again.
Running scene: tracking shot, insert music instrumental, video mute: OBB
Nick is smiling, muttering ‘’catch me’’ while playfully running, the kid however tries to chase nick in much effort as he can.
Freeze frame on the kid
VO; Yan, ano palang pangalan nyan? Si goyong, wala lang yan, nakikipag-agawan sa napulot naming tansan may ‘’ free kasi’’ sya ang nakakita, ako ang nakapulot malas lang nya.
Continue frame pan to nick
VO: Nick ang tawag nila sa akin, mati-nick daw kasi ako sa lahat ng bagay, ito ang kinagisnan kong mundo, simple lang, hindi mahirap hindi masarap, hindi madali, hindi ko alam.
Conitnue frame; Nick stumble on a beggars spot. The beggar holding his dog, annoyed by the disturbance nick has caused.
FREEZE FRAME:
VO: Yan naman si Arturo, ang palaboy kong kaibigan, pero mas kinakaibigan nya yung aso nyang si utoy, silang dalawa lang ang nagkakaintindihan sa mundong to, Minsan parang gusting katayin yang asong yan eh, kung pwede lang.
Conitnue frame on Arturo, who’s starting to blow a huge scream from his gut
Arturo: NICK! ANO BA! HOY!
Nick is still running, now making it a bit slow so the kid could catch up, still making a mockery out of the kid.
VO: Sino ba ang nagsabi na madali ang buhay, swerte na lang kung may libre, sa panahon ngayon madalang nalang dumaan ang magandang pagkakataaon, pero nung arawa nay un, di lang sa tansan ko natagpuan ang swerte.
Soon the chasing end up around the corner of the grandstand, nick collapsed in the grass, then gives the piece of bottle cup on the kid, Nick laughing extensively, the kid grabs the bottle cup, hold it firmly like a piece of treasure and said
GOYONG: (irritated and panting heavily ) Kuya Nick naman eh, pinapahirapan pa ako eh, bibigay mo din pala.
Nick still rolling in laughter, he can’t hardly give a proper response, then the kid, gasping for air, soon took off.
Lying on the grass, resting after he enjoyed the little hunt, game, looking at a bright clear sky, his smile slowly fades off from his face, touches his stomach and suddenly remembered something.
He quickly sat up, and think for a minute, stand up and started to walk back, he suddenly came to a halt and run towards his friend Arturo, who never change a bit of position from where he had left him.
Arturo, who keeps on rubbing his dog, turned a glare at Nick who’s fast approaching.
Arturo: Ano na naming problema? Nabugbog ka ni goyong noh?
Nick: (Panting ignoring arturos side comment)
Ngayon ba yung libreng pakain ng mga estudyante?
Arturo Looks dumbfolded and answered with a blank face with a no… and so… gesture)
Nick tries to pull his friend up in his spot and tries to continue and tries to convince him to come to the free lunch spot just around the square, Arturo, refused for a moment and soon gave in to Nicks Request.
Walking with Arturo, Nick Tries to Fix himself, grooms himself like a man going on a date.
Arturo looks at his friend mystified and asked why Nick is acting so starange
Arturo: Bakit yata biglang pumuporma, napuruhan ka ata ng malakas ni goyong ah, nakalaog na utak mo, (giggles)
Nick: (fixing his shirt, cleaning a bunch of dirt in his shorts looks at Arturo straitin the eye) Party yung pupuntahan natin, umayos ka naman. (kidding aside)
Arturo: Ano? Party? Eh relief operation lunch lang yun ng mga UB student eh
Nick: Kahit na! Mahirap na, minsan lang sa isang taon mangyari to.
Two kept on arguing until they came around the Melvin jones stage, they saw a bunch of student, handling foods to a bunch of people.
Nick (surprised and excited with a bit of frustration) Kita mo, ayan nagsimula na! mauubusan na tayo! Nag-iinarte pa kasi eh…
Arturo; (tries to defend himself) Sinabi ko naman sayo (thinks of something) madaming tao. (realized how redundant his answer was) Sinabi ko naman sya wag na tang pumunta eh, mamalimos pa ako, syang ang oras…
Nick: Ay! Ano ka ba! Eto na ang grasya! Papalampasin mo pa! ayaw mo nun may
makakain si utoy (looks at arturos dog)
Arturo; Feeling ko nga eh may sakit sya eh
Nick; Gutom lang yan
At this time, they were in a one line, unease and a bit in a hurry Nick can’t stand in his spot and keep look in front, while behind him Arturo was patting his dog, then one of the student shouted that catch the attention of the crowd
LADY: Pila Pila nalang po, Marami pa pong Pagkain, Huwag po tayong magtulakan
Pan to Arturo: Tamo! Marami pa daw! Huwag kang atat.
Nick suddenly stop moving, freezes and even stop listening to Arturo.
Arturo tries to snap his friends attention by waving his hand in front of nicks face, Nick didn’t mind, he is so focused to a girl who is handling out the lunch.
Nick: (face highlighted in a smile) Pare, tinamaan na ako.
Arturo look demoded and confused, as if his friend all of a sudden looks delirious and thinks it’s all because of hunder that made his friend crazier than usual.
Arturo; anung pinagsasabi mo? Okay ka lang??
Arthur looks at the point of view of nick but all he sees is a ugly girl screaming, artiro makes face in a disgust and said
Arturo: AMBADUY ng trip mo pare, yak! ( Hold his dog and covered ’’ utoys ‘’eyes)
Nick undisturb, loked eyes, slowly approaching the table, whiel Arturo, cut in and went infront of nick, nick did not notice, Arturo grabs his grub and said
Arturo: Miss, ate, yung aso ko ngay? Pwede? (he smiled showing his teeth)
LADY: uhhh (turns around and ask the girl behind her who is fixing the food)
Sarah! Pano to! Yung “aso” daw nya???
Slow motion Sarah truns his back and faced Arturo, Artuo drop daw in awe.
Looks at nick who seems in cloud nine, while the sweet voice of sarah echoed in his mind.
Sarah: Sir, sige po, may extra pa po kami, sa iyo nalang poi to
Arturo bowed and exchanges a shy grin, bowed and said thank you to sarah, ad left and moved out of the line.
LADY: (whispering) bakit mo binigay yung lunch mo?
Sarah: okay lang yun busog pa naman ako.
Nick break the conversation with a low uhh sound and like a mute he start to open his mouth but no words ever came out.
Nick; Uhhh ehhm, yuuuuunnggg,, ahhhhhhhh, ehhhhhh, errrrrr. Eerrrkkk…
Sarah looks at him and gave a sweet smile
Sarah: Eto na po kuya, para sa inyo!
Nick stood on his ground, stared at sarah’s eyes. Sarah however, keeps her smile ad tries to do sign language, thingking that nick is deaf or mute, a shout cracked from behind the line that snaps nick back to reality.
Arturo, grabs his friends out of the line,
Arturo: Pre! Umayos ka nga! San tayo kakain??
Nick: hah? (Looks back and glancing at sarah).
Sarah on the other hand, look as her watch, tapped the lady in front of her and signald that she has to be somewhere and she left the scene.
Nick’s eyes followed Sarah. As Arturo, keeps on muttering sound about his dos, his food, but nick just ignored his friend’s whining.
Nick: Dun nalang tayo sa lugar ko.
JUMP CUT to nicks place
Location: A corner of a park, with bunch of carton boxes.
Establishing shot then long shot of the two characters eating.
Arturo is having a lunch of his life while nick is still in the cloud nine.
Arturo ang sarap noh (swallows a big bite)
Nick; Ang ganda nya no ambait pa… (Exhale deep)
Arturo Sino?
Nick: Yung babae na nagbigay ng pagkain kay utoy.
Arturo: Ahh si sarah..
Nick: Sarah, panu mong nalama…
Arturo: (Cuts nick) sabog ka kasi kanina eh, tinawag sya nung kasamahan nya (*tries to imitate the lady) “sarah, panoyung aso daw nya” (then sent out a giggle)
Nick: Sarah pala…
Artuto; Kakainin mo ba yan.. pwdeng akin nalang (tries to snatch nicks lunch)
Nick: Ano ba! Asar ka ah, andami mo na ngang kinain, dalawang take out na yan, butas
ba sikmura mo? Nag-iinarte ka pa kanina, pinakain mo nab a si utoy?
Arturo: OO! (proudly)
Nick: eh bat hawak mo yang pagkain nya?
Arturo: EH! ayaw kumain, huwag ka ng makielam! (mouth full of foods) kumain ka
nalang.
Nick: tamo to, ang gulo mong kausap!
Arthur eats happily while Nick eats slowly and loving each bite.
VO: yun na sguro ang pinakamasarap naming tanghalian ni Arturo, masaya kasi naka jackpot nung araw na yun.
FADE OUT to Black
END OF CHAPTER1
this is just the first chapter jut to give the general opening view.
This a suspence comedy, the first chapter is a bit of humor,just an introduction of all the charcters, ill post the other scene as soon as i finished it.
This is our final film production diveded by five chapters running time is 30-45 min.
Synopsis
A ordinary bum, named Nick, who lives in the street, got entwined with a pshycotic killers plan, and started to hunt not only him but the people important to his life, His apple of the eye Sarah, a university student, is the next target of the strange killer, nick must chase time and do everything to save sarah.
even though sarah si clueless on everything
Special Note
Sarah will escape the killer, but end up dead in the end.
She thought that the killer is nick thats why she's trying to get away with him and fell off the cliff
thats explain the introduction scene
also nick will comit suicide and jump off the cliff too, holding the butterfly hair clip that sarah likes to wear.
Chapter 1
His-story
Chapter two
The Stranger
Chapter three
The Date
Chapter four
Saving a Death trap
Chapter five
the beggining of an end.
DRAFT SCRIPT
___________________________________________________
Working Title: paru-paro
‘’To be Able to tell my story, I need to tell their story’’
Opening Scene
A male, standing on a side of a cliff, crying and holding something in his left hand, looking up in the sky. His eyes full of despair and loneliness, bruise on his knees and a minor cut that bleeds in his thigh.
Cut Fade to Black Chargen Text: Few days ago
Flash Back
Chapter I.
His-Story
SCENE 1: LOCATION; along Harrison road, side walk near Melvin Jones Park.
Nick the main character is slowly walking, seems thinking about something deep, holding a bottle cup, playing with it, tossing it in the air, and holding it like a piece of prize.
Someone shouted from afar
KID: (extra) ‘KUYA NICK’
Nick will turn around to look at the kid, as there eyes met, Nick started to run, while showing the bottle cup, teasing the kid to chase him, the kid, tries to chase nick who’s fooling around again.
Running scene: tracking shot, insert music instrumental, video mute: OBB
Nick is smiling, muttering ‘’catch me’’ while playfully running, the kid however tries to chase nick in much effort as he can.
Freeze frame on the kid
VO; Yan, ano palang pangalan nyan? Si goyong, wala lang yan, nakikipag-agawan sa napulot naming tansan may ‘’ free kasi’’ sya ang nakakita, ako ang nakapulot malas lang nya.
Continue frame pan to nick
VO: Nick ang tawag nila sa akin, mati-nick daw kasi ako sa lahat ng bagay, ito ang kinagisnan kong mundo, simple lang, hindi mahirap hindi masarap, hindi madali, hindi ko alam.
Conitnue frame; Nick stumble on a beggars spot. The beggar holding his dog, annoyed by the disturbance nick has caused.
FREEZE FRAME:
VO: Yan naman si Arturo, ang palaboy kong kaibigan, pero mas kinakaibigan nya yung aso nyang si utoy, silang dalawa lang ang nagkakaintindihan sa mundong to, Minsan parang gusting katayin yang asong yan eh, kung pwede lang.
Conitnue frame on Arturo, who’s starting to blow a huge scream from his gut
Arturo: NICK! ANO BA! HOY!
Nick is still running, now making it a bit slow so the kid could catch up, still making a mockery out of the kid.
VO: Sino ba ang nagsabi na madali ang buhay, swerte na lang kung may libre, sa panahon ngayon madalang nalang dumaan ang magandang pagkakataaon, pero nung arawa nay un, di lang sa tansan ko natagpuan ang swerte.
Soon the chasing end up around the corner of the grandstand, nick collapsed in the grass, then gives the piece of bottle cup on the kid, Nick laughing extensively, the kid grabs the bottle cup, hold it firmly like a piece of treasure and said
GOYONG: (irritated and panting heavily ) Kuya Nick naman eh, pinapahirapan pa ako eh, bibigay mo din pala.
Nick still rolling in laughter, he can’t hardly give a proper response, then the kid, gasping for air, soon took off.
Lying on the grass, resting after he enjoyed the little hunt, game, looking at a bright clear sky, his smile slowly fades off from his face, touches his stomach and suddenly remembered something.
He quickly sat up, and think for a minute, stand up and started to walk back, he suddenly came to a halt and run towards his friend Arturo, who never change a bit of position from where he had left him.
Arturo, who keeps on rubbing his dog, turned a glare at Nick who’s fast approaching.
Arturo: Ano na naming problema? Nabugbog ka ni goyong noh?
Nick: (Panting ignoring arturos side comment)
Ngayon ba yung libreng pakain ng mga estudyante?
Arturo Looks dumbfolded and answered with a blank face with a no… and so… gesture)
Nick tries to pull his friend up in his spot and tries to continue and tries to convince him to come to the free lunch spot just around the square, Arturo, refused for a moment and soon gave in to Nicks Request.
Walking with Arturo, Nick Tries to Fix himself, grooms himself like a man going on a date.
Arturo looks at his friend mystified and asked why Nick is acting so starange
Arturo: Bakit yata biglang pumuporma, napuruhan ka ata ng malakas ni goyong ah, nakalaog na utak mo, (giggles)
Nick: (fixing his shirt, cleaning a bunch of dirt in his shorts looks at Arturo straitin the eye) Party yung pupuntahan natin, umayos ka naman. (kidding aside)
Arturo: Ano? Party? Eh relief operation lunch lang yun ng mga UB student eh
Nick: Kahit na! Mahirap na, minsan lang sa isang taon mangyari to.
Two kept on arguing until they came around the Melvin jones stage, they saw a bunch of student, handling foods to a bunch of people.
Nick (surprised and excited with a bit of frustration) Kita mo, ayan nagsimula na! mauubusan na tayo! Nag-iinarte pa kasi eh…
Arturo; (tries to defend himself) Sinabi ko naman sayo (thinks of something) madaming tao. (realized how redundant his answer was) Sinabi ko naman sya wag na tang pumunta eh, mamalimos pa ako, syang ang oras…
Nick: Ay! Ano ka ba! Eto na ang grasya! Papalampasin mo pa! ayaw mo nun may
makakain si utoy (looks at arturos dog)
Arturo; Feeling ko nga eh may sakit sya eh
Nick; Gutom lang yan
At this time, they were in a one line, unease and a bit in a hurry Nick can’t stand in his spot and keep look in front, while behind him Arturo was patting his dog, then one of the student shouted that catch the attention of the crowd
LADY: Pila Pila nalang po, Marami pa pong Pagkain, Huwag po tayong magtulakan
Pan to Arturo: Tamo! Marami pa daw! Huwag kang atat.
Nick suddenly stop moving, freezes and even stop listening to Arturo.
Arturo tries to snap his friends attention by waving his hand in front of nicks face, Nick didn’t mind, he is so focused to a girl who is handling out the lunch.
Nick: (face highlighted in a smile) Pare, tinamaan na ako.
Arturo look demoded and confused, as if his friend all of a sudden looks delirious and thinks it’s all because of hunder that made his friend crazier than usual.
Arturo; anung pinagsasabi mo? Okay ka lang??
Arthur looks at the point of view of nick but all he sees is a ugly girl screaming, artiro makes face in a disgust and said
Arturo: AMBADUY ng trip mo pare, yak! ( Hold his dog and covered ’’ utoys ‘’eyes)
Nick undisturb, loked eyes, slowly approaching the table, whiel Arturo, cut in and went infront of nick, nick did not notice, Arturo grabs his grub and said
Arturo: Miss, ate, yung aso ko ngay? Pwede? (he smiled showing his teeth)
LADY: uhhh (turns around and ask the girl behind her who is fixing the food)
Sarah! Pano to! Yung “aso” daw nya???
Slow motion Sarah truns his back and faced Arturo, Artuo drop daw in awe.
Looks at nick who seems in cloud nine, while the sweet voice of sarah echoed in his mind.
Sarah: Sir, sige po, may extra pa po kami, sa iyo nalang poi to
Arturo bowed and exchanges a shy grin, bowed and said thank you to sarah, ad left and moved out of the line.
LADY: (whispering) bakit mo binigay yung lunch mo?
Sarah: okay lang yun busog pa naman ako.
Nick break the conversation with a low uhh sound and like a mute he start to open his mouth but no words ever came out.
Nick; Uhhh ehhm, yuuuuunnggg,, ahhhhhhhh, ehhhhhh, errrrrr. Eerrrkkk…
Sarah looks at him and gave a sweet smile
Sarah: Eto na po kuya, para sa inyo!
Nick stood on his ground, stared at sarah’s eyes. Sarah however, keeps her smile ad tries to do sign language, thingking that nick is deaf or mute, a shout cracked from behind the line that snaps nick back to reality.
Arturo, grabs his friends out of the line,
Arturo: Pre! Umayos ka nga! San tayo kakain??
Nick: hah? (Looks back and glancing at sarah).
Sarah on the other hand, look as her watch, tapped the lady in front of her and signald that she has to be somewhere and she left the scene.
Nick’s eyes followed Sarah. As Arturo, keeps on muttering sound about his dos, his food, but nick just ignored his friend’s whining.
Nick: Dun nalang tayo sa lugar ko.
JUMP CUT to nicks place
Location: A corner of a park, with bunch of carton boxes.
Establishing shot then long shot of the two characters eating.
Arturo is having a lunch of his life while nick is still in the cloud nine.
Arturo ang sarap noh (swallows a big bite)
Nick; Ang ganda nya no ambait pa… (Exhale deep)
Arturo Sino?
Nick: Yung babae na nagbigay ng pagkain kay utoy.
Arturo: Ahh si sarah..
Nick: Sarah, panu mong nalama…
Arturo: (Cuts nick) sabog ka kasi kanina eh, tinawag sya nung kasamahan nya (*tries to imitate the lady) “sarah, panoyung aso daw nya” (then sent out a giggle)
Nick: Sarah pala…
Artuto; Kakainin mo ba yan.. pwdeng akin nalang (tries to snatch nicks lunch)
Nick: Ano ba! Asar ka ah, andami mo na ngang kinain, dalawang take out na yan, butas
ba sikmura mo? Nag-iinarte ka pa kanina, pinakain mo nab a si utoy?
Arturo: OO! (proudly)
Nick: eh bat hawak mo yang pagkain nya?
Arturo: EH! ayaw kumain, huwag ka ng makielam! (mouth full of foods) kumain ka
nalang.
Nick: tamo to, ang gulo mong kausap!
Arthur eats happily while Nick eats slowly and loving each bite.
VO: yun na sguro ang pinakamasarap naming tanghalian ni Arturo, masaya kasi naka jackpot nung araw na yun.
FADE OUT to Black
END OF CHAPTER1
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